Thanks for the reply. I still don`t understand your program or ideas.
After I read your pitch I had absolutely no sense of your idea. It seemed like complete nonsense
"Our company is called Bedford Marketing and INNovations (BMI); The Business, Income and Opportunities Provider.".
........ or I can say ......We create Business opportunities and Income Opportunities. We provide opportunities. In part this is what the McDonalds, Burger King and every other franchise corporations does, it offers a specific business and income opportunities.
We have the marketing programs with the ability to make businesses successfull, so we have decided not to stop with just one business opportunity.
The problem is that I am not an expert within every industry in which I want to do business, thus I thought it would be a good idea to try to locate potential partners... (people who know how to operate the desired business) from within a forum like this one, which I might add hasn`t been the most successful venture in my life because when I am straight up with what I have people don`t think it is realistic as you have demonstrated
I`m going to be very blunt. These phrases are utterly meaningless. It`s pure jargon, cliche, and drivel. It tells me absolutely nothing about BMI. It`s just wasted words. Try being plainspoken and straightfoward instead.
I was being straight forward and as plainspoken as I could be without telling you how the program works, I`m sorry but I have way to many years of effort put into this baby to have everybody on the internet able to mimic it.
I made rather pointed remarks about the total lack of clarity and the wide ranging generalities.
I thought I was clear,,, We will be creating opportunities... as far as what opportunities lets just say every opportunity, every type of business venture imaginable. People ask me what as I going to sell and I reply "everything" and I see by the look in their eyes `yea right`. That is why I didn`t phrase it that way within my pitch .
Im sure many people think that is just an impossibility but opening up the program actually helps make it stronger and more viable and successful not more Not Possible.
It doesn`t make sense to me. Perhaps I should be even clearer. . Like a long list of sentences that had very little relation to one another.
I guess i can only say , if you read each sentence by itself and take it face value instead attaching a preconceived notion of what it means or the possibilities of whether it is possible to achieve and make happen I feel it is very comprehendable. But maybe its because I have a clear view of the whole program, instead of a limited picture of it.
It`s just not credible to say that you have no competition.
Let me clarify, I stated that
"There is currently no company available that offers the range and latitude of opportunities that BMI has designed and is currently implementing."
I don`t know where you got the idea that I said I have no competition. I said there is no company available that offers the RANGE and LATITUDE of opportunities that BMI has designed and is currently implementing.
As a matter of fact, for the record, it is possible that every business outside my organization will be my competition at some level.
And if it`s as good an idea as you say, you will have competition soon after launch.
I understand this, that is one reason why it has taken me so long to try to overcome that obsticle and the reason why I have to implement it in different phases. make no mistake about it when I stated I had obsticle and pitfall to overcome.
Your pitch describes a system that is immune to competition.
Not immune to competition, But if I implement it correctly the market share that I obtain before the competition starts will be my because of the vested interest they will realize from the program. But thank you for noticing.
Except that`s not how the world works.
No Im going to be really cocky here if you don`t think I have yet, Your right that isnt the way the world works yet, When Im done that will be the way the world will work. I have the program that will change the way business is done. and thats a fact whether you want to believe it or not
lastly I thought I had it covered when I said
Our goal and "Purpose in Life" is to create as many successful opportunities as possible, not just profits.
Im not sure how you didnt understand what I was offering.
There are two types of people in the world, the negative , pestimistic, devil`s advocate type who have the uncanney ability to come up with every way why something won`t work and those who think positively and come up with ways that will make it work. I have some to the conclusion that there are few people who think the latter unless it is their program or idea the in so many cases they are blinded by there subjectivity.
i`m sorry I don`t have the time to proof read this post because work calls.