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Hey everybody,

I have a couple of websites that I could use some advice and comments on. I thought I could get a few people to take a look and see what they think by joining and using StartupNation. Here they are, just please post a reply on here so I can forward the information to the webmaster and things can get changed. I hope you like them!!

www.tradefloor.bartermore.com
A low fee trade exchange site.

www.mjstreasures.com
An online store showcasing cottage industry products and other various items.


Thanks a million!!

Rion Redinger

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Great points by Roland.

Why have categories with nothing in them?
The color scheme does nothing for the site.

And try reading your opening paragraphs as if you were a first time visitor; would you consider buying form this site? To me, it`s like saying " We don`t have much, and we aren`t of much help, but if nothing else we`ll give you a credit that you can maybe pass along to someone else ".

And the first link .... I get it, but I don`t get it. The concept of trade dollars isn`t, at least to me, really clear as to how they are set up, where they come from. Maybe its too much explanation that confuses me, but it just isn`t really clear the way I read it.


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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

(an aside - vwebworld and webline, over this year you both have been fantastic contributors to fellow entrepreneurs. when we started StartupNation`s online community it was our hope that people like you would provide advice that was invaluable to those in need of help. that`s exactly what you guys do and i just wanted to express thanks on behalf of StartupNation.)

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Rich Sloan , Co-Founder, Chief Startupologist, StartupNation

Awww, shucks ..... t`warnt nuthin .... :)

Thank you for the comment, Rich. I have to say that, for what little I have contributed here, I have learned much more from otheres that has been beneficial to me. I hope you know what a great asset this site is to all of us.

Thanks, and keep up the great work.



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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

Thank you Rich, I appreciate your comments.

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This is encouraging for me to hear ...um read this. I just hope that my dad can read it and make an educated decision with these websites. I have been telling him the same thing for the last year or so. Thanks for the support. Please stop by and check them out from time to time to see the progress.

Thanks,
Rion