WE are look at slogans right now, thinking about “On November 7 Elect to feel the Pleasure,” What do you think?
Showboxers, you referred to my Logo as looking homemade, well that is exactly what it was, but I have a question for you about that. Do you find the overall look of the logo unappealing or is it just the way it was rendered? You are a woman, please give me you opinion on the overall color layout of the sites. Is it too much pink (a shame you can`t change the color here) for you? You referred to the front page having too much reading and being boring, exactly what would you like to see on the front page?
I am not crazy about the slogan and I think it limits you by having an actual date integrated within the wording. How about just Elect to Feel the Pleasure?
I think the logo can be a good logo but needs to not have the homemade look to it. It is rough in design and needs to be smoothed out and cleaner looking if that makes any sense? And yes, far too much pink and the pink is so bright it makes the logo hard on the eyes for me anyhow. How about a more suttle pink or my advice would be purple for the logo color? A lot of women these days that I know do like purple as opposed to pink in my opinion.
I would also incorporate a second color within the headers so the color of the logo is complemented but not competing with the content colors. You could use a lighter varition of the logo color even.
On the front page I recommend to keep it simple and eye catching. Put the script you have on the front page on a separate page in the site and the consumer can opt to go read it if they choose. The first thing a potential customer sees should be something that gets the customer`s attention and can be absorbed within a few seconds time, give them something where you get their interest and feel they want to go and find out more about your product. The front page is akin to your store front and you want the store front to draw them into your store.
Go to some other commercial sites and see how their front page looks. Including businesses that do well that are selling products similar to yours as well the ones that sell unrelated products. On my front page I feature 6 products that are in my store where the customer can click through and it takes them directly into my store area. I plan to change the pictures once a month to keep the front page fresh to keep customers coming back. Have you thought about carrying other products as well so you have more to offer the customers and hopefully to generate more business for yourself?
I was only teasing about the machine comment and a man designing it. I do wish you luck with your venture!
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