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robertfalco

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Apr 15, 2009 6:33 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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guys i have start my new logo design business... i would like you people to please critique my 3d logo design or my business logo design website.. i will be very thankful to you if you guys review my website http://www.logobench.com
robertfalco4/15/2009 6:30 AM
bvmike

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Apr 15, 2009 10:53 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Let me start out by commenting on your slogan. You need to change this! I would like to hope that conception is not your specialty.
 
As for the design, I think it is really good. You should place more of your examples above the fold. I could just barely see the first set of logos at the bottom of the page, and needed to scroll down for the full set. You can always place an image scroller somewhere above the fold to conserve space. I would also recommend a redesign of the navigation menu. It needs better buttons and rollover effects.
 
Good luck!
ArcherTC

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Apr 15, 2009 12:29 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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LOL!

I agree with bvmike here.  Although, yes, conception can be used in this way, I am not sure that it would be worth the guffaws it creates.  And in this age of Twitter, it only takes one person pointing it out as humor before you`re sunk.

Further, with all of the package details, it`s packed with words and a bit dizzying.  Perhaps pare down?

Otherwise, very nice!  I wish you luck with it (and will keep it in mind).



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Apr 15, 2009 1:00 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I would say that there are too many choices for people to evaluate and would remove the text "Turn Around" from the options.

If you`re telling me that you can give me 20 meaningful logos in under 2 days, my question to you is are you spending any time getting to know my business and my customers so that my logo rings strong to them?  My point is that I would rather have 5 or 7 well thought out logos than some artist just churning out 20 for me - I think it dilutes your brand to offer that.

CraigL

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Apr 15, 2009 5:28 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Great logo, but the page loaded weird. It came up, then scrambled, then loaded some more, then redrew itself again. If you could get a more smooth loading, it`s really nice. :-)
Videography

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Apr 15, 2009 6:10 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Loaded fine here, Craig.  I think it`s safe for you to upgrade from Firefox V1, no?

Yes, "Conception" could be a problem.  Or you could capitalize on it.  Beat the jokes to the punch.

What happens if the client doesn`t like your conceptions?  Any guarantees?




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robertfalco

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Apr 16, 2009 7:44 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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thank you guys!! i will concern these comments in future.. i also want you guys to do some critique on logo design of logobench
robertfalco4/16/2009 7:40 AM
robertfalco

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Apr 21, 2009 6:36 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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hi guys thank for your comment i really appreciate it.. i just want to inform you guys i have recently updated my logo design portfolio so guys i request you to please comment on my new designs.. thanks..
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